離2015年中考考試不到一年的時(shí)間了,中考考生可在平時(shí)做一些試題,題不在多,多了孩子也不做,在于精。做完之后一定要改錯(cuò),先想想自己錯(cuò)在哪,再去看解析,逐漸糾正自己的思維或是彌補(bǔ)自己的漏洞。在中考英語作文考試中也是一樣的思路,避開一些常識(shí)性錯(cuò)誤問題。
第一類錯(cuò)位可以分為下面幾種:
1. 審題不清
如2014年一篇中考真題作文要求寫一項(xiàng)最喜歡的課外活動(dòng),有些考生將作文的主題定位為“我最喜歡的活動(dòng)”,偏離了“一項(xiàng)、課外活動(dòng)”這一主題。依據(jù)作文的評(píng)分原則,若文章內(nèi)容不切題,則不管語言如何規(guī)范、用詞如何準(zhǔn)確,都會(huì)被判為零分。
2.拼寫錯(cuò)誤
拼寫是考生應(yīng)該具備的最起碼的基本功,但在考生的作文中卻經(jīng)常能發(fā)現(xiàn)很多拼寫錯(cuò)誤。有拼寫錯(cuò)誤的作文肯定會(huì)被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼寫錯(cuò)誤存在的作文不僅體現(xiàn)出語言基本功差,同時(shí)也直接影響內(nèi)容的表達(dá),通常會(huì)降低作文的檔次。
3.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)問題
誤 my father and my mother is all teacher。
正 my father and my mother are both teachers。
4.缺少動(dòng)詞
在漢語中沒有動(dòng)詞的句子是允許的,但英語中每個(gè)完整的句子都必須有 動(dòng)詞來構(gòu)成,如:“我累了!边@個(gè)句子沒有動(dòng)詞作謂語,而用形容詞,但英語形容詞不能作謂語,一定要寫成:i'm tired。
誤 i happy i can come to beijing zoo。
正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。
誤 the apples cheap. i'll take some。
正 the apples are cheap. i'll take some。
5.缺少介詞、冠詞等
還有一些考生因?yàn)闆]有熟練掌握介詞或者冠詞的用法,不了解中英文語言習(xí)慣的不同,也會(huì)出現(xiàn)明顯的錯(cuò)誤,造成丟分現(xiàn)象。
誤 because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
正 because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。
6.代詞的誤用
英語中代詞的形式很多,包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分;此外漢語中很多時(shí)候不用物主代詞,而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的,代詞的誤用是考生最容易發(fā)生的錯(cuò)誤。
誤 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。
正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。
7.句子不完整
有的考生因?yàn)閷?duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)認(rèn)識(shí)模糊,所以出現(xiàn)只寫半句的現(xiàn)象,這也是造成失分的原因之一。
誤 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school。
(這段文章的第二句話沒有動(dòng)詞,他不能獨(dú)立構(gòu)成一個(gè)句子。這是一個(gè)非常常見的錯(cuò)誤,修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來。)
正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school。
8.前后不一致
所謂不一致,包括數(shù)的不一致、時(shí)態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致、主謂不一致等。
例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do。
(人一旦有了知識(shí),他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析:one是單數(shù)第三人稱,因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has ;同理,want應(yīng)改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致。
改為 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)
9.時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的搭配錯(cuò)誤
漢語動(dòng)詞無時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的變化,而對(duì)英語來說,這些都至關(guān)重要。例:
誤 when i get to the station the train leave。
正 when i got to the station the train had left。
10.綜合性錯(cuò)誤
綜合性錯(cuò)誤是指單詞的大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的錯(cuò)誤等,以及形容詞和副詞的混淆、連詞的誤用等等。這些都是靠考生平時(shí)知識(shí)的積累,所以考生應(yīng)該從平時(shí)練習(xí)出發(fā),每天堅(jiān)持寫英語日記,多讀適合自己英語水平的原版著作,提高自己的英語素養(yǎng)。
第二錯(cuò)誤:優(yōu)秀作文范文
范文1:〖題目〗請(qǐng)你仔細(xì)閱讀下面的招聘廣告。
Boys and girls aged 12-15.
Are you good with children?
Happy kids winter camp Needs help with:
sports music computers
Come and join us! Send your personal (個(gè)人) information to hkwc @163.com.
假如你是李平想要應(yīng)聘,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)招聘廣告中的要求,在表格空白處至少填出兩項(xiàng)你所能做的事情。并根據(jù)表格中的所有信息,發(fā)一封e-mail,介紹你的個(gè)人情況、興趣愛好及能力。字?jǐn)?shù)40~60。信的開頭、結(jié)尾已給出
Name——Age——School——Like——can
Li Ping——13——No.3 Middle School——Reading,computers,Playing basketball
Dear sir,
I want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music.
I think I can be good with the children and I hope to get your letter soon.
Yours, Li Ping
〖范文〗Dear sir,
I want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music.
My name is Li Ping I am thirteen (years old). I study / am a student in No. 1 Middle School. I like reading and playing basketball. I like computers, too. I can play football well. I can stag many English songs, And I can dance and swim. I can surf the Internet and send e-mails.
I think I can be good with the children and I hope to get your letter soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
范文2:〖題目〗假如你的爸爸是個(gè)醫(yī)生,曾參加了2003年的非典防治工作,雖然非典已經(jīng)過去了,但是他對(duì)一家人的健康仍然很重視。請(qǐng)你寫一篇60詞左右的短文,講一下只要預(yù)防得當(dāng),疾病并不可怕。參考詞匯:personal health個(gè)人健康 spit吐痰;overwork使……過于疲勞 food and drink飲食
〖范文〗Keeping healthy
My father is a doctor. In 2003, he took an active part in the battle against SARS.
He said,“We don't have to be afraid of catching the illness. If we have good habits, we can keep the illness away.”
My father and I like running in the morning. We keep the windows open so that the air in the room is clean and fresh. We wash our hands before meals. We have healthy food and drink. We don't spit here and there. He told us not to overwork because too much work will make us tired and make it easy to get sick.
范文3〖題目〗你的爸爸抽煙嗎?請(qǐng)寫一篇小短文描述抽煙的害處,回家后讀給你的爸爸聽。(60詞左右)提示如下:
1.抽煙有害健康,不能長壽;2.抽煙易導(dǎo)致疾病;3.抽煙還危害別人。
〖范文〗Smoking and Health
Everyone knows smoking is bad for health. People who smoke too much may not live long. Many people die from smoking each year.
Smoking causes many illnesses. Smokers have bad teeth. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. Smoking can easily cause lung cancer.
Smoking is bad for smokers, and it's also bad for women and children, too.
I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them. Let's enjoy clean air.
范文4〖題目〗有很多同學(xué)早晨上學(xué)不吃早餐,這是一個(gè)不好的習(xí)慣,對(duì)身體有很大的危害。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文,指出不吃早餐的危害。70個(gè)詞左右。
提示:1.不吃早餐對(duì)身體有害;2.不吃早餐會(huì)影響上午聽課。
〖范文1〗
Every morning we have to go to school very early, so many of us don't have breakfast. It's very bad for our health. In the morning we usually have four classes. It's a long time before lunch. If we don't eat anything for breakfast, we may feel hungry and we can't listen to the teacher carefully. We need energy very much while we are growing. I really think that we should have a good breakfast.
〖范文2〗How to keep healthy
If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food——more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don't feel well, you'd better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It's necessary for our health.
We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails and smoke etc. It's also very important.
范文5:〖題目〗中秋節(jié)的英語作文-The Mid-Autumn Festival
〖范文〗The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn is a very important Chinese festival. It falls on the 15th day of August. A few days before the festival, everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful. Lanterns will be hung in front of the house.
On the evening there will be a big family dinner. People who work far away from their homes will try to come back for the union. After dinner, people will light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with their own toy lanterns happily.
At night the moon is usually round and bright. People can enjoy the moon while eating moon-cakes which are the special food for this festival. They can look back on the past and look forward to the future together. It is said that there was a dragon in the sky. The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon. To protect the frighten the dragon away.
〖譯文〗中秋節(jié)
中秋節(jié)是中國一個(gè)很重要的節(jié)日,在八月十五號(hào)。在節(jié)日來臨的前幾天,家庭中的每一個(gè)人都幫著打掃房子,把房子裝扮得漂漂亮亮的,燈籠掛在屋前。
晚上有一頓美餐,離家在外工作的人也要回來團(tuán)圓。晚飯后,人們點(diǎn)亮燈籠,一般是紅色的圓燈籠。孩子們會(huì)高高興興地玩他們的玩具燈籠。
晚上月亮又圓又大,人們?cè)谫p月的同時(shí)吃著中秋節(jié)特別的食品——月餅。人們?cè)谝黄鸹仡欉^去,展望未來。據(jù)說天上有一條龍,它要把月亮吞下去。為了保護(hù)月亮,孩子們要弄出很大的響動(dòng)把龍嚇跑。
以上是中考英語作文應(yīng)避免的錯(cuò)誤內(nèi)容,唯學(xué)網(wǎng)會(huì)為您整理其他科目的試題同時(shí)祝廣大考生在2015年中考中發(fā)揮出最佳水平,考出好成績!