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ԭThe absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society
ģThe absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society
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ԭYou will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture
ģYou will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture
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ԭFirstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might effect their further development
ģFirstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development
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ԭNowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be excellent
ģNowadays, people are crazy about excellence
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ԭBesides, public speech can effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career
ģBesides, public speech can effectively improve your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career
u̎һ@Ąee`ߡɡԓimprove the skillsincrease the skills
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ԭI will forget my sad and pressure from the work and the study
ģI will forget my sadness and pressure from work and study
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ԭAlthough making money is a priority for most people, spending time with the family is equal significant
ģ, spending time with the family is equally significant
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4. rB(ti)y
ԭAlthough I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job
ģAlthough I had no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job
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ԭI would explain my view in the following paragraphs
ģId like to explain / I will explain
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ԭThe way we deal with the environmental problems are crucial to the prosperity of human-being
ģThe way we deal with the environmental problems is crucial to the prosperity of human-being
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6. ؏٘
ԭFrom my point of view, I think this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help learning a foreign country
ģFrom my point of view, this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help us learn a foreign country
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ԭThere are the majority of people who deem that they like to spend money on things which can bring them long memory
ģMajority of the people like to spend money on things that can be memorized for long
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7. ʽӢZ
ԭThus, one is easier to draw bosses attention and gain appreciation
ģThus, its easier for you to draw bosses attention and gain appreciation
uTf˂ԸϰעӢZtTfIts easier for sb. toͬWҪעӢTą^(q)eŶ!
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